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Tuesday, March 25, 2008

Warm Fuzzies #3: i.e. Why I should be a playwright

Here are some of the comments I received as feedback on the piece that my Fiction Seminar class recently workshopped:
  • This narrator is very real and believable and I can totally see this very scenario unfolding in everyday life.
  • You are an excellent story-teller and the voice you give your characters rings true. The way that you juxtapose the ordinary and the dliberate dialogue with the frantic and passionate inner-dialogue is a difficult task and yet one which you accomplish wonderfully. The manner by which you meld these two literary elements together is quite impressive.
  • Your work has an easy quality—I mean it flows easily and smoothly, drawing the reader in. The detail is great.

    From what was said in class, I apparently rely almost too heavily on dialogue. “More telling detail,” my professor demands. “The character revelation is in the detail.” But at least I am telling a story people believe and are entertained by—in that manner, I am achieving my goal. However, I definitely have a penchant for dialogue. Perhaps I shall try my hand again at playwriting?

  • 1 comment:

    Anonymous said...

    And you're waiting for what?....